tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275093834818398021.post6507986244029792455..comments2023-10-26T07:46:34.503-05:00Comments on Tabby's Nocturnal Nights: Showing vs. TellingTabitha Blakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08481112489770686775noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275093834818398021.post-56207193576507332872011-03-18T23:35:34.412-05:002011-03-18T23:35:34.412-05:00Sometimes I "act" out my characters reac...Sometimes I "act" out my characters reactions, like facial expressions, etc., to describe them just right. Always when no one else is watching, of course.<br /><br />LilaLila Bartonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006168932126447852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275093834818398021.post-5707924706397443582011-03-17T20:18:36.656-05:002011-03-17T20:18:36.656-05:00Great points. The AutoCrit Editing Wizard is real...Great points. The AutoCrit Editing Wizard is really helpful at finding areas where you've told instead of shown. It finds nests of 'was/were', feel/saw, etc. <br /><br />It really helps me improve my manuscript because sometimes these things are really hard to see if your own work.Janinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00272527704400070501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275093834818398021.post-90237508339625390122011-03-17T14:36:51.334-05:002011-03-17T14:36:51.334-05:00I never get tired of show vs. tell posts. Good pos...I never get tired of show vs. tell posts. Good post. Oh, and if there were a #6, it'd be: Have great crit partners! LOLSheri Fredrickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17074141702013317937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275093834818398021.post-45351192140921590192011-03-17T11:34:01.402-05:002011-03-17T11:34:01.402-05:00Oh, nice, helpful post, Sara.Oh, nice, helpful post, Sara.Brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03721556815192785649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4275093834818398021.post-45126336195509595162011-03-17T01:03:36.426-05:002011-03-17T01:03:36.426-05:00Very helpful post that serves as a good reminder o...Very helpful post that serves as a good reminder of showing vs telling!Lisa Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17993498875059318892noreply@blogger.com